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This is excellent. Love the song and the comedic timing.

InsertNameEnt responds:

Thank you! We're glad you liked the short!

goddammit

now I have diabetes... honestly, this cartoon is what gave it to me 16 years ago. i am pretty glad, however, that my pump does not talk like that.

SherClockHolmes responds:

I am sure you would love a passionate insulin pump! wink wink.

Praise + Suggestions

i loved the concept, and i loved how the first robot's face was sad even when smiling. good stuff!

i felt you took something away from the robot's character though when he grabbed the axe. it was hard to sympathize with him afterwards, though i am glad it was nothing suicidal. perhaps he could have been set up by the other robot, who then would have killed him for his 'just' cause.

the human could have been more detailed to match the robot. when he held the blanket up to his face, it didn't match and looked slightly awkward

intercut titles are nice, but maybe a few too many at the beginning. they tend to raise expectations very high, as in a feature length film. I say keep them for the end in shorts.

also, and this may be personal preference, but i would have found the whole thing much more artistic if it were in black and white. honestly, just try it and see how it looks :)

just a few ideas,
-spectre757

Matt-Merrill responds:

hey there, thank you for the suggestions! I found them all to be very helpful and agree that all of them would almost definitely help to make the movie better.
I don't think I will bother changing things in this particular movie, but I'll keep your advice in mind working on my other movies. Thanks again!

Nice Drawings

But can't you spell? Grapics? Animatiors? C'mon...

Try drawing a few extra frames for fighting next time. If you had just one extra one where the zealot pulled his arm in, you could switch back and forth between that and the extended one.

It might look better than tweening everything.

LegolaSS responds:

well there adam... you these are early days, i know my spelling is bad but hey?... you knew what it ment, "and it might look better than tweening everything?" well iv spent a few seconds looking at your work and basicly out he selection i chose... stick men... *tweened with some basic fbf*, a real time moive?... not even flash, and joes grad... yeah what ever, i dont really care, but thanks for having the time to review, and if u think im be harsh im not, i do it to everyone... *dam 13 year old porn addicted children!!!* well thanks for your views and trust me my later ones with have far more fbf and stuff in them... keeping and an inprovment of the graphics as well... chow

Looks promising ;)

i love frame-by-frame animation, especially when it pans all the way around someone. Amazing job. To improve for the actual release, clean up that sky/overhead shot. I know the style you're going for is colouring outside of the lines, but it looks kind of messy.

Cheers,
spectre757

KenSkaii responds:

like i said, it was a test. and i put absolutely no effort into the drawings. dont worry. for the final product, you will see quality work. (well that depends on what you consider quality work)

She jumped off a cloud...

...that was so creepy. I enjoyed the twisted style of it, and the twisted landscapes. A little more shading would have gone a long way. Keep up the amazing work, but next time, try a better thumbnail, lol. It's barely even a face!

-spectre757

notorious responds:

lol, actually she jumped off a floating island, but same thing. I'll try to make better artwork in the future.

Awesome, awesome climax.

He had no reason to live by the time they killed him. Everything conveyed that perfectly, especially the facial expressions.

Nice work!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Thank you!

Good stuff

But when the guy was driving the car, I can't understand why you didn't make the stars out the window move. How easy would that have been? Two, maybe three minutes, and the car would've looked like it was moving. Oh well... I liked how it didn't end after 2 minutes like most other cartoons like this.

Next-Project responds:

Yeah, i noticed that...i just figured that when you are driving in a car, the stars in the sky dont move when you look at them...but to make the car look like it was moving...yeah it probably was necessary to animate the stars...oh well, im still glad you enjoyed the movie!

Solid

Everything was gold 'cept for the turning cars and crappy credits on top of the screen. I suggest you draw a middle frame for each car when it turns, so they won't jump around. And for the credits, put them on different layers and make them move or flash or something.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

with credits, you mean subtitles?They orignally weren`t included at all, i put them in later due to crappy voices.For now, only episode 0 has no subs..And i got lots of complaining about that..THe cars were a new 3d experiment for me..But in the curent episodes(episode 13, 14) i use full animation more, so i draw a whole new car every frame..

lol... whatever terrorists they were

i liked the animation, but you gotta admit, there wasn't much point to killing those guys. They were Arabic, and I guess most Arabs are terrorists or so the reasoning goes... but you should've had them training or doing some terrorist stuff to justify their slaughteringness.

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

Well, I did say they were taking a break from making bombs and trAining. So the guy with no mercy is smart, because he came just at the rigth time when they had no weapons.

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