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[Fluete -SE-]

nice

It reminds me of the Iron Giant. Feathers like robot pieces, maybe?

[The Park 2]

I liked

the credits especially. Zooming out, the energy... whoa...

[lemon tree]

Nice style

It was funny, and I loved the style (coloured characters over B&W backgrounds) but the problem was the middle was the best part. It needs a more developed ending, and as for the beginning, you could have taken the part with the tv out and not lost anything storywise. Shouldn't there be more dire consequences to killing the last lemon on the lemon tree? If it were my lemon tree, I'd do more than tsk tsk tsk... lol

[Video Dating Tape]

Too Abrupt?

I would have liked to see a more complete ending. How does he answer the phone? What's the girl's story? Are they, oddly, right for each other? Resolve something for me, don't cut to a quick credits frame.

[Transparency - Episode 1]

hehehe

it was a hydralisk sound...

[THE MIND]

Confusing?

That made perfect sense... What are you talking about?

[The Old Doug & Jim Ep. 4]

Good stuff

But when the guy was driving the car, I can't understand why you didn't make the stars out the window move. How easy would that have been? Two, maybe three minutes, and the car would've looked like it was moving. Oh well... I liked how it didn't end after 2 minutes like most other cartoons like this.

Next-Project responds:

Yeah, i noticed that...i just figured that when you are driving in a car, the stars in the sky dont move when you look at them...but to make the car look like it was moving...yeah it probably was necessary to animate the stars...oh well, im still glad you enjoyed the movie!

[Imp, episode6]

Solid

Everything was gold 'cept for the turning cars and crappy credits on top of the screen. I suggest you draw a middle frame for each car when it turns, so they won't jump around. And for the credits, put them on different layers and make them move or flash or something.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

with credits, you mean subtitles?They orignally weren`t included at all, i put them in later due to crappy voices.For now, only episode 0 has no subs..And i got lots of complaining about that..THe cars were a new 3d experiment for me..But in the curent episodes(episode 13, 14) i use full animation more, so i draw a whole new car every frame..

[No Mercy]

lol... whatever terrorists they were

i liked the animation, but you gotta admit, there wasn't much point to killing those guys. They were Arabic, and I guess most Arabs are terrorists or so the reasoning goes... but you should've had them training or doing some terrorist stuff to justify their slaughteringness.

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

Well, I did say they were taking a break from making bombs and trAining. So the guy with no mercy is smart, because he came just at the rigth time when they had no weapons.

[south park matrix demo]

Not so terrible

There's potential. You can make better stuff, just take a few of my suggestions.

-use a proper preloader
-make sure the music plays the whole way through
-add sound effects, maybe even voices
-plan out a cohesive-looking ending
-add a special layer just for gore (hehe)
-put some credits at the end
-and, hand to hand fighting is always good... just make sure it's not all from the same angle

And listen to no one using four-lettered words. The only reviews worth reading suggest improvements, not insults.